Composition 1 A very long time ago, on a small farm, I was helping my grandparents with chores. I was picking some apples from the trees when I heard a sound coming from the other tree. I ignored it at first but it wouldn’t stop so I decided to take a look At first, I didn’t see anything but as I looked closer I saw that it was a kitty in the tree that was stuck. I helped it get out of the tree, putting it on the ground, then I went inside to rest a little. I watched some tv but then I saw something move on the floor. It was the kitty that I helped earlier, I was shocked because I closed the door, but I remember I left my window open. I went downstairs and told my grandmother what happened, then she told me that I can keep it if I want to. I said yes and from that day that kitten stayed with me. Composition 2
Nothing similar had happened before. My parents planned a surprise, we were going in one day to another city to visit my cousins. The next day we packed our things and went by car at 5 pm. After 2 hours it was getting dark outside, and my phone ran out of battery so I looked up the window seeing that we were in a forest. Some time passed when suddenly our car stopped. I thought that my dad stopped it but he didn’t. I got really scared because you couldn’t see anything, everything was dark. We stayed like that for 10 minutes, they felt like hours. I thought that we were going to stay here until morning because we had no signal and my phone was dead anyway. But after those 10 minutes passed the car finally turned on and we continued our trip, but in the end, we arrived at my cousins safely without having any more issues on the road. Daria D.
It was the kitty that I HAD helped earlier, I was shocked because I HAD closed the door, but I remember I HAD left my window open. I went downstairs and told my grandmother what HAD happened, then she...
Composition 1 Nothing similar had happened before, says Anna . Mary asks what happened, and Anna starts to tell her.
One day I was shopping with my mother to make a delicious and tasty cake. It was the eve of the holidays and the street smelled of tangerines, the shops were full of sweets and ornaments. Everyone enjoyed the Christmas.
But suddenly a loud noise was heard, Everyone froze. After that 2 times, 3 times... until the burglar came and we laid down. The saller gave him all the money so that he hasn't been shot. My mother told me to run, but it was dark outside as the bottom of the ocean and the white and shining mantle was making its way. In the end I arrived in a forest near the Swan Lake. It was cold and I couldn't walk anymore. I stopped near a tree and tried to make a fire.
Behind me I saw a shadow. I was scared, but I couldn't move because of the coldess. He was a lost man just like me. I stayed with him and made the fire. In the morning I started to go home. My mother was at the table upset and worried about me. She hugged me and told me that she would never leave me alone. It was a terrible adventure and an unwanted experience.
Composition 2 A very long time ago, on a small farm I helped my parents with household chores. I had a great time with the sheep, the cows, horses. I gave each of them a name. I took care of them, I fed them, played with them, and in the evening I sat with the horses in the stable.
One evening Bolt escaped because I left the door open. He was the most naughty horse on the farm. He never listen to me and my parents. I cried for whole days, but I decided to go with my father to look for him. I walked for days, I looked for him at the neighbors, but there was no trace of him. I was disappointed and upset that I could never see him again.
When suddenly a group of horses ran behind us. Hoofs was heard. The horses sign us to follow them, and my father and I accepted. In the evening I arrived at the place where Bolt was. He was hit in the leg. I hugged him and my father tried to cure him. On the way home, we were all happy for his return! Bianca B.
ROBBER ...After that ANOTHER 2 SHOTS, THEN OTHER 3 BANGS.The sEller gave him all the money so that he WOULDN'T be shot... but I couldn't move IN FEAR AND because of the COLD... I stayed with him and LIT the fire... In the morning I TRIED to FIND MY WAY BACK home...My UPSET mother was at the KITCHEN table worrYING about me.
THAT evening Bolt escaped ...thenaughtIEST horse ...He never listenED to me and my parents...I cried for DAYS..Suddenly a HERD of horses ran behind... The horses signALLED us to follow...He was hit in the LEFT REAR leg...my father tried to CLEAN AND SEW THE WOUND.
Crina 1)A very long time ago, on a small farm,had lived some magic animals,as the legend said. They could speak ,but their owners didn’t now that,until a day.
Their owners names were Georgia and Miguel.They had a naughty daughter,named Julia.Julia really did loved her dog,Max.
Max had always played with Julia in the afternoons.It was 2 years old when Georgia brought a cat in the farm.Max wasn’t that excited as the family hoped he would be.It thought that the new handsome cat would take it’s place from the farm.
The dog talked a lot with the cat,but neither of their discussions ended well.They were always fighting because of the food.
One day,when Julia arrived home,she caught them talking.She was shocked and she couldn’t belive her ears. The dog started barking and it hoped that the girl didn’t hear it,but she did.
Julia wanted to tell her parents about the situation,but they wouldn’t belive her anyway.
She had talked to her animals everyday and told them about her school problems.They were her best friends.
When she was at school,her teacher gave her her mobile phone.Julie talked with her mother and found out that Max and the cat were hit by a car and they cound’t stay alive. She started crying,took a buss and ran home as fast as she could.
A week later,on a strange afternoon,she heard her dog’s voice. She thought that she was crazy and ignored it. Julie went to bed,but she could’t sleep because she was still thinking about her animals.An hour later she heard her cat’s voice. She went to her parents,woke them up and told them that before they died,they could speak and now she was hearing their voices.Georgia and her husband didn’t take her tolds in into account. After some days,they moved in another country,hopefuly that their daughter would be better.She was.
The legend said that Max and the cat are still haunting the old house and if you move there,you’ll hear their voices.
2) Nothing similar had happened before. One day,while I was playing tennis with my friends,Ana and Lisa,I saw a shadow. I know you think it was a normal one,but it wasn’t,I swear. I and my friends have followed it.Lisa said that me and Ana are insane and it probably was a normal human shadow,but we didn’t think that.
We arrived in a forest,the weirdo shadow disappeared,but we had seen a red light.I was thinking that maybe the aliens were on our planet and they would eat our bones.Lisa and Ana thought that it was just a light.We followed it too because our curiosity was huge.
The light disappeared too.We wanted to give up,but someone touched my shoulder.I starled and we started runing.
I was too scared to look back and see who touched my shoulder,but Lisa did looked.She told us that it wasn’t a human,it had three legs and four fingers on a hand,it’s hair was green and it’s skin was purple.
Maybe she saw wrong and we’ve just overeacted,but if she was right..
,some magic animals HAD LIVED ,as the legend said. They could speak ,but their owners didn’t Know that,until a day...Julia really LOVED her dog,Max....Max wasn’t AS excited as ... would take ITS place ON the farm...she couldn’t beliEve her ears...SINCE THEN SHE WOULD talk to her animals every DAY ...by a car and they couLnd’t MAKE IT. She started crying,took a BUS and....husband didn’t take her WORds in into account.
I and my friends FOLLOwed it.Lisa said that me and Ana WERE insane and ...but we SAW a red light...I starlTed and we started runNing...but Lisa DID ...ITS hair was green and ITS skin was purple.
Maybe she IMAGINED and we just overeacted,but if she was right..
Composition 1 A very long time ago,on a small farm I found a hungry and emaciated baby rabbit in front of the cottage where I lived with my grandparents. At first glance it seemed that it didn't have much left to live, but I didn't leave it outside in the cold so I quickly went to to show my grandparents what I just found. At first,they weren't that happy with the idea of keeping a little bunny inside the house,because they said that they didn't think that I am enough responsible to take care of it. Then I got upset so when they weren't paying attention, I went outside to get some pieces of cardboard, some material and salad from the fridge to make a bed for my little friend and to feed him. I played with him all day until I decided to make him a delicious snack, but unfortunately there was no more lettuce or carrots. I quickly went to the garden to get some lettuce, carrots and tomatoes and in the end I came from new in the cottage. At one point I chose to give him a name, more precisely I called him Ricardo because at the time I thought it was a funny name. In the end,I realised that I don't need a bestfriend anymore because I had my little fluffy friend. Composition 2 Nothing similar had happened before. I had to move to another class because all my classmates made me feel stupid and looked down on me which made me not want to go to school anymore. In the end the hard times have passed and I was going to move to another class where I was going to meet my new teacher and my new classmates. I hoped that my new classmates would be much more understanding, welcoming and kind to me because I didn't want to go through what I had gone through before. Good luck My, I was right. Everyone was very nice to me and no one made fun of me, which made me extremely happy. I made new friends and I was happier than ever The saddest moment was when I knew that at some point the teacher would have to take another class and we would have new teachers and maybe even new classmates. -Teo
I quickly went to show my grandparents what I HAD just found...At first,they weren't REALLY/ happy with the idea of keeping...RESPONSIBLE ENOUGH ... in the end I came in the cottage AGAIN
A very long time ago, on a small farm a white gorgeous horse was born.
It's owner came up with the name “Flash” because only after a week he was already competing with the older horses in races around the property
Flash became faster and stronger by the day, and his owner saw his potential. One day he decided to sign Flash and other horses up for a horse race. Flash easily won the competition, as it was just a small local race and not something that serious.
After his success people offered to buy Flash but his owner refused, as he already grew close to the horse.
For the rest of his life, the horse kept participating in races, winning a lot of money, which were mostly used for his gear, food and care.
Composition 2
Nothing similar had happened before.
It was a normal school day. We had a biology test later in the evening about the human brain. No one studied, obviously and we were thinking of skipping the class, as it was the last one.
As we were leaving, the teacher entered the classroom, so we had to stay. We were all upset, because we knew that we will most likely not pass.
I never liked biology especially this lesson, because it was long and complicated. When I saw the subjects I was shocked. I realized that I didn’t know almost anything.
When I was about write the answer to number one, I heard I loud thud coming from the front of the class. It was my teacher. She collapsed on the floor and she wasn’t moving. I needed a moment to process what just happened. My classmates realized that she had fainted and dialed 112.
The ambulance arrived shortly after, the teacher being rushed to the hospital. We were all a bit terrified and worried about her.
Long story short, she was okay. The next day she came back to school. When we sau her, she thanked us for calling 12.
In the end we all got a 10 on that test than no-one studied for.
I think that the second one is longer than it should.
Homework 1. A very long time ago, on a small farm, a small mistreat from the owner changed the fate of the farm. Because that year’s harvest was poor, the owner of the farm couldn’t afford feeding all the animals, making the animals angry. After some days of starving, the smartest animals (the pigs) wanted to eject the owner of the farm, and become the leaders of it. Their revolution started with a speech to all of the animals from the farm. They gave a speech in which they told the animals that if they could eject the owner from the house, their lives would be better, that they weren’t going to be dependent on a single person, that they were going to be equal, the pigs, the horse, the cow, the dogs, the sheep were going to sleep in the same place, eat the same food, work equally hard, and together they were going to survive as a small community. One night, the owner of the farm got drunk, and left the house. When they saw the drunk owner, the animals attacked him, the dogs started biting him and the horse kicked him in the stomach, that was enough for the owner to run away and never come back. That night marked the first minutes of the pigs’ leadership. The first two months went by like the pigs promised; they started working the field in front of the house, started repairing the barn and even built a small fountain. Everything was supervised by the pigs, but they didn’t behave as they were superior to the other animals. That changed one morning when on one of the barn’s wall was written that the pigs had the permission to sleep in the house, which until that moment was not allowed, but no one dared to complain about it. That was the turning point. From then, the pigs started to add more rules which only advantaged them. After six months since the revolution had place, the pigs started to act as the old owner, which made the rest of the animals angry again, that eventually led to another revolution in the farm but this time it didn’t work as it did last time. After the removal of the pigs, the farm collapsed and every animal just left the place, which in short time became a ruin. This story represents the human nature. The majority of people who get to have absolute power over others, start abusing it, and forget their first intentions and ideas.
2. Nothing similar had happened before. That moment let me stunned. I’ve only visited my grandparents from my mother’s side twice in my life and that was in my childhood. This happened because my parents had a harsh argument with them when I was a child and because of that I had never seen them since. I was given three free days from work, so I decided to go visit my grandparents. They lived in a small, isolated village, so the only way to get there was by train. The train ride was awful, the train was rusty, noisy and the trip took three hours; more than it should have taken. When I arrived on the platform, I was surprised to see that the village was emptier than it was in my memories. I slowly walked to their house, trying to find the right way. When I finally arrived, my grandfather was repairing the fence. At first he didn’t recognised me, but after I told him who I was he hugged me and invited me in the house. When I entered, my grandmother was laying the table, she had finished cooking just before I arrived. I took dinner with them, talking about what happened in our lives since our last meeting. We talked for some time, then we went to sleep. In the morning, I took breakfast with them, we said goodbye and then I left. After I got home, I called my father and told him about the meeting with my mother’s parents. He remained speechless for a minute, and than told me that my grandparents died four years ago.
composition 1 : A very long time ago, on a small farm, there lived a farmer who had a son. His son loved gardening, especially flowers. His favorite flower was an oxeye daisy. He always took good care of his flowers and wanted to know every little thing about each one of them. One day he was spraying fertilizer on his flowers like he does every three weeks for all of them and when it came to the last flower, the oxeye daisy, he tripped and all the fertilizer that was in the bottle poured onto the daisy. The boy was devastated, he tought he killed his favorite flower, but instead of dying, the flower stayed up. The boy tought it was nothing wrong with it and went into the house to do his homework and then sleep. Next day, when he woke up, the boy looked out the window and what he saw had him thinking he was going crazy, the daisy grew so big, it was now toughing the house's roof. The boy rubbed his eyes and even pinched himself to make sure he wasn't dreaming or hallucinating. Sadly he wasn't doing any of these, but he had a bigger problem to take care of. He had to make the daisy go back to its normal size, but he had no idea how to do that. The boy took the fertilizer bottle and read what was written on it. "...keeps the snail away from the flower...". Of course, the snails that were annoying him then, were going to help him now. He quickly ran and gathered a bucket of snails and put them on the ginormous flower. The snails took their time on eating the flower, which took about 7 hours, but they ate it all right before the boy's parents came home. The boy has learned his lesson with flowers and was now going to take care of his steps too, not just the flowers.
composition 2 : Nothing similar had happened before, the lights turned off and no one was home at the moment. I looked over at my twin after I turned the flashlight on and she was terrified too. We looked at the clock, it was 12:10 a.m. and no one was home. Our first tought was, where could the whole family be in the middle of the night. The silence has never been so loud, I tought it was just a power run out, but fifteen minutes have passed by and the street lights were on, so we decided to go down and check the electric pannel, but there was only one problem, we were both afraid of the dark and it was the middle of the night. I went down the stairs to check and I heard something. The sound of steps, someone was in the house. My heart staretd pounding as I ran petrified into the bedroom and told my twin what was happening, of course she tought I was playing with her and she went down to see if what I was telling was actually true. As expected she came back running and swore she's never going down there at night time ever again. There was nothing left to do than go down toghether, and if something happens we would both or at least one of us see. As we were slowly going down the stairs the lights turned on and we saw our parents and little brother in the living room with balloons behind them that said "happy birthday".
... he tHought he killed his favorite flower, but instead of dying, the flower stayed up. The boy ASSUMED it was nothing wrong with it ...it was now AS HIGH AS the ROOF OF THE HOUSE.
Our first tHought was where the whole family COULD be in the middle of the night.The silence haD never been so loud, I BELIEVED it was just a power run out, but AFTER fifteen minutes THE STREET LIGHTS WERE ...of course she tHought I was playing with her and she went down to see if what I was telling was actually true. As expected she came back running and swore she WOULD never GO down there at night time ever again...There was nothing left to do than go down TOGether, and if something happenED we would both or at least one of us see.
Homework - Ana 1.A very long time ago, on a small farm, a little girl was walking among the animals like pigs, cows, chickens, horses and others.
The farmer’s son saw her walking, and joined. They weren’t allowed to stay with animals because the animals can get angry and hurt them. The boy knew that, but didn’t tried to stop the girl and continued the walk.
They became friends very fast. Finally, someone saw them walking among the animals and sent them to their houses. The little girl and the boy planned to meet next Friday, behind the stable, at 1 pm.
Next Friday, the boy wasn’t at the location where they planned to meet. The girl was looking for him for 2 hours, until she saw his grandfather. He said that his nephew moved 2 days ago in Italy for the rest of his life.
The girl was really sad, and from that day she would no longer step in that farm again.
2.Nothing similar had happened before I entered the house and saw the disaster in it.
Last week on a Wednesday morning, I decided to go on a walk with my best friend. My dog couldn’t come with us because in malls animals aren’t allowed.
I left my dog at home for 5 hours, and when I came back home I had a surprise. This wasn’t a good surprise. My house was robbed. I was in shock. I couldn’t understand how my house was robbed and my dog wasn’t in it. I started to cry and called the police.
Until the police came, I had to investigate my house. All the glasses and windows were broken, all the house was full of dirt and my dog’s paws. I searched for my dog everywhere in the house but it wasn’t there.
When the police arrived and examined all the house with a specialist, they noticed there wasn’t a thief in my house. It was only my dog.
After a few hours my dog started to bark under my bed. I was very scared, but i realized that my dog was under my bed all the day after the diseaster.
After what happened, I didn’t leave my dog home alone.
A very long time ago,on a small farm, I was with my cousin Ionut helping my grandfather with small things in the farm and after we finished our work Ionut comes next to me and pulled a pack of fire crackers and asked me if i wanted to throw them with him and because I was 9 and a very energetic kid of course i aceepted.Ionut and I started throwing fire crackers in our back yard and he had an ideea. What if we started to throw them as far as we could.We did that but it didn’t last long because he threw a fire cracker in a hay bale and it got on fire and we ran home and pretended like nothing had happend
Nothing similar had happend before. My parents woke me up at 6AM telling me they had a surprise for me. I got in the car and slept for like 2 hours.When i woke up i saw that we were at the airport. At this point i was really confused but after following my parents in the airport i found out that we were going at my long distance cousing in Sweden. We got there and my cousin made my day one of the best days of my life .He bought us tickets to a Metallica concert. We got very lucky because we aere close to the scene.Not going to lie i had a pretty good time there and i alse made a photo with the guitarist of the band,Kirk Hammett.
" I " always with capital letter I was with my cousin Ionut helping my grandfather with small things On HIS farm and after we finished our work Ionut comes next to me and pulled a pack of fire crackers and asked me if I wanted to throw them with him and because I was 9 and a very energetic kid.Of course , I acCepted...like nothing had happenEd
that we were going at my long-distance COUSIN in Sweden... we Were close to the sTAGE...and I alsO TOOK a photo with the guitarist of the band,Kirk Hammett.
Composition 1 A very long time ago, on a small farm the sun rose. The sky was changing colors quickly and soon, it was clear and blue.
The animals started to wake up one by one and to play around. The noise was getting louder and louder. The leaves were floating and playing with the baby animals. The wind was blowing their fur and was cooling them. They all came out of the barns to enjoy the magic morning and to snuggle on the warm grass.
Everything was peaceful until the owner came with food. All the animals piled up for it. The food and water disappeared rapidly from the massive bowls. The ground was a completely mess after the feeding so the owner had to clean all the leftovers.
These types of mornings were lovely. My heart loved to see that such simple animals could appreciate their owner more than anything.
Composition 2 Nothing similar had happened before. All sorts of animals from the immense forest near the village came to fight for their families. The villagers hushedly left the village with their hearts beating faster than ever.
The animals made their ways in people’s houses and left disaster. They were conveying each other through low sounds what they were seeing. There were animals in every yard and the fences started to fall apart. The streets were full of trash, metals and food.
One of the tiny squirrel noticed a towering building that smelled like meat and wanted to show it to the others. All the animals were staying unwavering in front of it. They decided to go in and quickly realized that it was a butcher. The walls were full of meat and leather.
The animals came out nervous. In front of the building there were many hunters with bows, but the animals were ready to attack them. Fortunately, no animal or human were harmed and they managed to bring the animals back to the forest.
The villagers fathomed that it was because of the animal killing and stopped doing it excessively. Soon, the village started to get more plantations and to use less animal products.
The ground was a complete mess... One of the tiny squirrelS... ...it was a butcher'S...The animals came out nervousLY... no animal or human wAS harmed...
1. A very long time ago, on a small farm of my grandparents, I had to do the important chores. For example to feed the animals or to collect vegetables and fruits. My grandparents weren’t there for a few hours, so I had to do that alone.
I started to collect the carrots in a basket, then the lettuce. I put both baskets in the place my grandmother told me. After that, I fed the sheep, the pigs, the ducks, the chicken and the turkeys. I thought I closed the sheepfold and the pigsty very well but it didn’t.
The pigs split to the right and the sheep to the left. I panicked, I didn’t know what to do. I tried to come up with a plan. This was to catch the pigs first because the sheep had already known the path. I succeeded to catch all of the pigs in a short time. They stopped at a tree, I was lucky because there were just three of them. I closed the pigsty, then I effortlessly found the sheep.
My grandparents arrived after approximately half an hour and until that I played with their adorable cats. I told them what happened and expected to be upset about my negligence. Instead, they were proud of me because I knew how to handle the situation.
2. Nothing similar had happened before the day I entered the room and saw what a disaster it was.
I have had my kitten, Caramel, for 2 years now. He's orange, white dotted and overly playful. I noticed he seemed sad and he didn’t have the same energy he had. Because I suspected he just felt single, I decided to adopt a new little cat.
At first they couldn’t stand each other so I was suppose to separate them. They stayed for a long time in different rooms but easily my cats became best friends. They shared the food together, they played together, they did everything together.
One day I went in a trip for three days. I asked my friend to take care of them while I was gone, so she checked and fed them every morning and evening. On the last evening, I told her to stay home because I would get back home.
While I wasn’t with them, my cats, Caramel and Snowflake were calm and they didn’t break anything. The day I came my house was a mess. Everything was a disaster, I couldn’t imagine it was possible.
I wasn’t distraught, but I spent a lot of time to clean every corner of the house. I thought they wanted to make me a surprise.
1. The amputation A very long time ago, on a small farm , I was helping my grandparents to plant some vegetables. Outside was warm and sunny. The grass was like the emerald and the butterflies were flying as airplaines. It was such a wonderful day but then I heard some noises. It was my cat . It was fighting with a snake. I was afraid of snakes, so I called my grandpa to come and to help its. My grandfather came fast as he could, he took a bow with arrows and he had thrown with an arrow and surprising he had hit the snake. I was very proud of my grandpa, hence I made his favourite cake and the best lemonande I ever made. After the cake, we went to the Vet to see what the cat had. The vet said that it had one nip one the paw. That was meaning that the cat had to amputate its paw. I was very unhappy but if we didn’t done the amputation, we would have lost its. So we did the operation.
The operation was a succes and the cat was healthy!
2. Dream Nothing similar had happened before. I was outside with my friends. It was a rainy and dark day. We were bored but suddenly a man appeard. That man was called Happy. He told us that he could teleport us into a sweet world, where we could find anything we wished. Bored, as we were, we didn’t realise that we could suffer something, so we went in his world. We didn’t feel nothing on the way because Happy injected some serum in us. My friends and I were teleported in the sweet world. The sweet world consisted only of sweets. It was delicious. Sweets everyway we looked. There were sweets from the entire world. Happy said that we could eat how many sweets we wanted. So that was what we did. We ate almost all the candies. I and my friends were so tired that we could sleept anywhere. So Happy took us and put us in a big cooker. One of my friends realised that we were in a huge cooker , so he woke us. Toghether we tried to escape but we couldn’t. Luckily it was just a dream! Maria
... Outside IT was warm and sunny.. to help IT...came AS fast as he could... he SHOT ONE and surprisingLY he HIT the snake.... SO I made... the best lemonade I HAD ever made.... one nip on the paw... That MEANT that the cat had to HAVE its paw AMPUTATED.... we HADN'T done the amputation, we would have lost IT... The operation was a succesS and the cat was healthy AGAIN!
Composition 1
ReplyDeleteA very long time ago, on a small farm, I was helping my grandparents with chores. I was picking some apples from the trees when I heard a sound coming from the other tree. I ignored it at first but it wouldn’t stop so I decided to take a look
At first, I didn’t see anything but as I looked closer I saw that it was a kitty in the tree that was stuck. I helped it get out of the tree, putting it on the ground, then I went inside to rest a little. I watched some tv but then I saw something move on the floor.
It was the kitty that I helped earlier, I was shocked because I closed the door, but I remember I left my window open. I went downstairs and told my grandmother what happened, then she told me that I can keep it if I want to. I said yes and from that day that kitten stayed with me.
Composition 2
Nothing similar had happened before. My parents planned a surprise, we were going in one day to another city to visit my cousins. The next day we packed our things and went by car at 5 pm.
After 2 hours it was getting dark outside, and my phone ran out of battery so I looked up the window seeing that we were in a forest. Some time passed when suddenly our car stopped. I thought that my dad stopped it but he didn’t. I got really scared because you couldn’t see anything, everything was dark. We stayed like that for 10 minutes, they felt like hours.
I thought that we were going to stay here until morning because we had no signal and my phone was dead anyway. But after those 10 minutes passed the car finally turned on and we continued our trip, but in the end, we arrived at my cousins safely without having any more issues on the road.
Daria D.
It was the kitty that I HAD helped earlier, I was shocked because I HAD closed the door, but I remember I HAD left my window open. I went downstairs and told my grandmother what HAD happened, then she...
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ReplyDeleteNothing similar had happened before, says Anna . Mary asks what happened, and Anna starts to tell her.
One day I was shopping with my mother to make a delicious and tasty cake. It was the eve of the holidays and the street smelled of tangerines, the shops were full of sweets and ornaments. Everyone enjoyed the Christmas.
But suddenly a loud noise was heard, Everyone froze. After that 2 times, 3 times... until the burglar came and we laid down. The saller gave him all the money so that he hasn't been shot. My mother told me to run, but it was dark outside as the bottom of the ocean and the white and shining mantle was making its way. In the end I arrived in a forest near the Swan Lake. It was cold and I couldn't walk anymore. I stopped near a tree and tried to make a fire.
Behind me I saw a shadow. I was scared, but I couldn't move because of the coldess. He was a lost man just like me. I stayed with him and made the fire. In the morning I started to go home. My mother was at the table upset and worried about me. She hugged me and told me that she would never leave me alone.
It was a terrible adventure and an unwanted experience.
Composition 2
A very long time ago, on a small farm I helped my parents with household chores. I had a great time with the sheep, the cows, horses. I gave each of them a name. I took care of them, I fed them, played with them, and in the evening I sat with the horses in the stable.
One evening Bolt escaped because I left the door open. He was the most naughty horse on the farm. He never listen to me and my parents.
I cried for whole days, but I decided to go with my father to look for him. I walked for days, I looked for him at the neighbors, but there was no trace of him. I was disappointed and upset that I could never see him again.
When suddenly a group of horses ran behind us. Hoofs was heard. The horses sign us to follow them, and my father and I accepted. In the evening I arrived at the place where Bolt was. He was hit in the leg. I hugged him and my father tried to cure him.
On the way home, we were all happy for his return!
Bianca B.
ROBBER ...After that ANOTHER 2 SHOTS, THEN OTHER 3 BANGS.The sEller gave him all the money so that he WOULDN'T be shot... but I couldn't move IN FEAR AND because of the COLD... I stayed with him and LIT the fire... In the morning I TRIED to FIND MY WAY BACK home...My UPSET mother was at the KITCHEN table worrYING about me.
DeleteTHAT evening Bolt escaped ...thenaughtIEST horse ...He never listenED to me and my parents...I cried for DAYS..Suddenly a HERD of horses ran behind... The horses signALLED us to follow...He was hit in the LEFT REAR leg...my father tried to CLEAN AND SEW THE WOUND.
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ReplyDelete1)A very long time ago, on a small farm,had lived some magic animals,as the legend said.
They could speak ,but their owners didn’t now that,until a day.
Their owners names were Georgia and Miguel.They had a naughty daughter,named Julia.Julia really did loved her dog,Max.
Max had always played with Julia in the afternoons.It was 2 years old when Georgia brought a cat in the farm.Max wasn’t that excited as the family hoped he would be.It thought that the new handsome cat would take it’s place from the farm.
The dog talked a lot with the cat,but neither of their discussions ended well.They were always fighting because of the food.
One day,when Julia arrived home,she caught them talking.She was shocked and she couldn’t belive her ears.
The dog started barking and it hoped that the girl didn’t hear it,but she did.
Julia wanted to tell her parents about the situation,but they wouldn’t belive her anyway.
She had talked to her animals everyday and told them about her school problems.They were her best friends.
When she was at school,her teacher gave her her mobile phone.Julie talked with her mother and found out that Max and the cat were hit by a car and they cound’t stay alive.
She started crying,took a buss and ran home as fast as she could.
A week later,on a strange afternoon,she heard her dog’s voice.
She thought that she was crazy and ignored it.
Julie went to bed,but she could’t sleep because she was still thinking about her animals.An hour later she heard her cat’s voice.
She went to her parents,woke them up and told them that before they died,they could
speak and now she was hearing their voices.Georgia and her husband didn’t take her tolds in into account.
After some days,they moved in another country,hopefuly that their daughter would be better.She was.
The legend said that Max and the cat are still haunting the old house and if you move there,you’ll hear their voices.
2) Nothing similar had happened before.
One day,while I was playing tennis with my friends,Ana and Lisa,I saw a shadow.
I know you think it was a normal one,but it wasn’t,I swear.
I and my friends have followed it.Lisa said that me and Ana are insane and it probably was a normal human shadow,but we didn’t think that.
We arrived in a forest,the weirdo shadow disappeared,but we had seen a red light.I was thinking that maybe the aliens were on our planet and they would eat our bones.Lisa and Ana thought that it was just a light.We followed it too because our curiosity was huge.
The light disappeared too.We wanted to give up,but someone touched my shoulder.I starled and we started runing.
I was too scared to look back and see who touched my shoulder,but Lisa did looked.She told us that it wasn’t a human,it had three legs and four fingers on a hand,it’s hair was green and it’s skin was purple.
Maybe she saw wrong and we’ve just overeacted,but if she was right..
,some magic animals HAD LIVED ,as the legend said.
DeleteThey could speak ,but their owners didn’t Know that,until a day...Julia really LOVED her dog,Max....Max wasn’t AS excited as ... would take ITS place ON the farm...she couldn’t beliEve her ears...SINCE THEN SHE WOULD talk to her animals every DAY ...by a car and they couLnd’t MAKE IT.
She started crying,took a BUS and....husband didn’t take her WORds in into account.
I and my friends FOLLOwed it.Lisa said that me and Ana WERE insane and ...but we SAW a red light...I starlTed and we started runNing...but Lisa DID
Delete...ITS hair was green and ITS skin was purple.
Maybe she IMAGINED and we just overeacted,but if she was right..
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Composition 1
ReplyDeleteA very long time ago,on a small farm I found a hungry and emaciated baby rabbit in front of the cottage where I lived with my grandparents. At first glance it seemed that it didn't have much left to live, but I didn't leave it outside in the cold so I quickly went to to show my grandparents what I just found.
At first,they weren't that happy with the idea of keeping a little bunny inside the house,because they said that they didn't think that I am enough responsible to take care of it. Then I got upset so when they weren't paying attention, I went outside to get some pieces of cardboard, some material and salad from the fridge to make a bed for my little friend and to feed him.
I played with him all day until I decided to make him a delicious snack, but unfortunately there was no more lettuce or carrots. I quickly went to the garden to get some lettuce, carrots and tomatoes and in the end I came from new in the cottage.
At one point I chose to give him a name, more precisely I called him Ricardo because at the time I thought it was a funny name.
In the end,I realised that I don't need a bestfriend anymore because I had my little fluffy friend.
Composition 2
Nothing similar had happened before. I had to move to another class because all my classmates made me feel stupid and looked down on me which made me not want to go to school anymore.
In the end the hard times have passed and I was going to move to another class where I was going to meet my new teacher and my new classmates. I hoped that my new classmates would be much more understanding, welcoming and kind to me because I didn't want to go through what I had gone through before. Good luck My, I was right. Everyone was very nice to me and no one made fun of me, which made me extremely happy.
I made new friends and I was happier than ever
The saddest moment was when I knew that at some point the teacher would have to take another class and we would have new teachers and maybe even new classmates.
-Teo
I quickly went to show my grandparents what I HAD just found...At first,they weren't REALLY/ happy with the idea of keeping...RESPONSIBLE ENOUGH ... in the end I came in the cottage AGAIN
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A very long time ago, on a small farm a white gorgeous horse was born.
It's owner came up with the name “Flash” because only after a week he was already competing with the older horses in races around the property
Flash became faster and stronger by the day, and his owner saw his potential. One day he decided to sign Flash and other horses up for a horse race. Flash easily won the competition, as it was just a small local race and not something that serious.
After his success people offered to buy Flash but his owner refused, as he already grew close to the horse.
For the rest of his life, the horse kept participating in races, winning a lot of money, which were mostly used for his gear, food and care.
Composition 2
Nothing similar had happened before.
It was a normal school day. We had a biology test later in the evening about the human brain. No one studied, obviously and we were thinking of skipping the class, as it was the last one.
As we were leaving, the teacher entered the classroom, so we had to stay. We were all upset, because we knew that we will most likely not pass.
I never liked biology especially this lesson, because it was long and complicated. When I saw the subjects I was shocked. I realized that I didn’t know almost anything.
When I was about write the answer to number one, I heard I loud thud coming from the front of the class. It was my teacher. She collapsed on the floor and she wasn’t moving. I needed a moment to process what just happened. My classmates realized that she had fainted and dialed 112.
The ambulance arrived shortly after, the teacher being rushed to the hospital. We were all a bit terrified and worried about her.
Long story short, she was okay. The next day she came back to school. When we sau her, she thanked us for calling 12.
In the end we all got a 10 on that test than no-one studied for.
I think that the second one is longer than it should.
ITS OWNER ...he already grew close to BE AN ADULT horse.
DeleteWhen I was about TO write the answer to REQUEST number one...I needed a moment to process what HAD just happened. When we saW her...
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1. A very long time ago, on a small farm, a small mistreat from the owner changed the fate of the farm.
Because that year’s harvest was poor, the owner of the farm couldn’t afford feeding all the animals, making the animals angry. After some days of starving, the smartest animals (the pigs) wanted to eject the owner of the farm, and become the leaders of it.
Their revolution started with a speech to all of the animals from the farm. They gave a speech in which they told the animals that if they could eject the owner from the house, their lives would be better, that they weren’t going to be dependent on a single person, that they were going to be equal, the pigs, the horse, the cow, the dogs, the sheep were going to sleep in the same place, eat the same food, work equally hard, and together they were going to survive as a small community.
One night, the owner of the farm got drunk, and left the house. When they saw the drunk owner, the animals attacked him, the dogs started biting him and the horse kicked him in the stomach, that was enough for the owner to run away and never come back.
That night marked the first minutes of the pigs’ leadership. The first two months went by like the pigs promised; they started working the field in front of the house, started repairing the barn and even built a small fountain. Everything was supervised by the pigs, but they didn’t behave as they were superior to the other animals. That changed one morning when on one of the barn’s wall was written that the pigs had the permission to sleep in the house, which until that moment was not allowed, but no one dared to complain about it.
That was the turning point. From then, the pigs started to add more rules which only advantaged them. After six months since the revolution had place, the pigs started to act as the old owner, which made the rest of the animals angry again, that eventually led to another revolution in the farm but this time it didn’t work as it did last time. After the removal of the pigs, the farm collapsed and every animal just left the place, which in short time became a ruin.
This story represents the human nature. The majority of people who get to have absolute power over others, start abusing it, and forget their first intentions and ideas.
2. Nothing similar had happened before. That moment let me stunned.
I’ve only visited my grandparents from my mother’s side twice in my life and that was in my childhood. This happened because my parents had a harsh argument with them when I was a child and because of that I had never seen them since.
I was given three free days from work, so I decided to go visit my grandparents. They lived in a small, isolated village, so the only way to get there was by train. The train ride was awful, the train was rusty, noisy and the trip took three hours; more than it should have taken.
When I arrived on the platform, I was surprised to see that the village was emptier than it was in my memories. I slowly walked to their house, trying to find the right way. When I finally arrived, my grandfather was repairing the fence. At first he didn’t recognised me, but after I told him who I was he hugged me and invited me in the house. When I entered, my grandmother was laying the table, she had finished cooking just before I arrived.
I took dinner with them, talking about what happened in our lives since our last meeting. We talked for some time, then we went to sleep. In the morning, I took breakfast with them, we said goodbye and then I left.
After I got home, I called my father and told him about the meeting with my mother’s parents. He remained speechless for a minute, and than told me that my grandparents died four years ago.
Ionut
" Animal Farm " - great choice
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DeleteHAD happened in our lives since our last meeting...WE HAD BREAKFAST / LUNCH / DINNER
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ReplyDeleteA very long time ago, on a small farm, there lived a farmer who had a son. His son loved gardening, especially flowers. His favorite flower was an oxeye daisy. He always took good care of his flowers and wanted to know every little thing about each one of them.
One day he was spraying fertilizer on his flowers like he does every three weeks for all of them and when it came to the last flower, the oxeye daisy, he tripped and all the fertilizer that was in the bottle poured onto the daisy. The boy was devastated, he tought he killed his favorite flower, but instead of dying, the flower stayed up. The boy tought it was nothing wrong with it and went into the house to do his homework and then sleep.
Next day, when he woke up, the boy looked out the window and what he saw had him thinking he was going crazy, the daisy grew so big, it was now toughing the house's roof. The boy rubbed his eyes and even pinched himself to make sure he wasn't dreaming or hallucinating. Sadly he wasn't doing any of these, but he had a bigger problem to take care of. He had to make the daisy go back to its normal size, but he had no idea how to do that. The boy took the fertilizer bottle and read what was written on it. "...keeps the snail away from the flower...". Of course, the snails that were annoying him then, were going to help him now. He quickly ran and gathered a bucket of snails and put them on the ginormous flower.
The snails took their time on eating the flower, which took about 7 hours, but they ate it all right before the boy's parents came home. The boy has learned his lesson with flowers and was now going to take care of his steps too, not just the flowers.
composition 2 :
Nothing similar had happened before, the lights turned off and no one was home at the moment. I looked over at my twin after I turned the flashlight on and she was terrified too. We looked at the clock, it was 12:10 a.m. and no one was home. Our first tought was, where could the whole family be in the middle of the night.
The silence has never been so loud, I tought it was just a power run out, but fifteen minutes have passed by and the street lights were on, so we decided to go down and check the electric pannel, but there was only one problem, we were both afraid of the dark and it was the middle of the night. I went down the stairs to check and I heard something. The sound of steps, someone was in the house. My heart staretd pounding as I ran petrified into the bedroom and told my twin what was happening, of course she tought I was playing with her and she went down to see if what I was telling was actually true. As expected she came back running and swore she's never going down there at night time ever again.
There was nothing left to do than go down toghether, and if something happens we would both or at least one of us see. As we were slowly going down the stairs the lights turned on and we saw our parents and little brother in the living room with balloons behind them that said "happy birthday".
- Monica
... he tHought he killed his favorite flower, but instead of dying, the flower stayed up. The boy ASSUMED it was nothing wrong with it ...it was now AS HIGH AS the ROOF OF THE HOUSE.
DeleteOur first tHought was where the whole family COULD be in the middle of the night.The silence haD never been so loud, I BELIEVED it was just a power run out, but AFTER fifteen minutes THE STREET LIGHTS WERE ...of course she tHought I was playing with her and she went down to see if what I was telling was actually true. As expected she came back running and swore she WOULD never GO down there at night time ever again...There was nothing left to do than go down TOGether, and if something happenED we would both or at least one of us see.
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ReplyDelete1.A very long time ago, on a small farm, a little girl was walking among the animals like pigs, cows, chickens, horses and others.
The farmer’s son saw her walking, and joined. They weren’t allowed to stay with animals because the animals can get angry and hurt them. The boy knew that, but didn’t tried to stop the girl and continued the walk.
They became friends very fast. Finally, someone saw them walking among the animals and sent them to their houses. The little girl and the boy planned to meet next Friday, behind the stable, at 1 pm.
Next Friday, the boy wasn’t at the location where they planned to meet. The girl was looking for him for 2 hours, until she saw his grandfather. He said that his nephew moved 2 days ago in Italy for the rest of his life.
The girl was really sad, and from that day she would no longer step in that farm again.
2.Nothing similar had happened before I entered the house and saw the disaster in it.
Last week on a Wednesday morning, I decided to go on a walk with my best friend. My dog couldn’t come with us because in malls animals aren’t allowed.
I left my dog at home for 5 hours, and when I came back home I had a surprise. This wasn’t a good surprise.
My house was robbed. I was in shock. I couldn’t understand how my house was robbed and my dog wasn’t in it. I started to cry and called the police.
Until the police came, I had to investigate my house. All the glasses and windows were broken, all the house was full of dirt and my dog’s paws. I searched for my dog everywhere in the house but it wasn’t there.
When the police arrived and examined all the house with a specialist, they noticed there wasn’t a thief in my house. It was only my dog.
After a few hours my dog started to bark under my bed. I was very scared, but i realized that my dog was under my bed all the day after the diseaster.
After what happened, I didn’t leave my dog home alone.
A very long time ago,on a small farm, I was with my cousin Ionut helping my grandfather with small things in the farm and after we finished our work Ionut comes next to me and pulled a pack of fire crackers and asked me if i wanted to throw them with him and because I was 9 and a very energetic kid of course i aceepted.Ionut and I started throwing fire crackers in our back yard and he had an ideea. What if we started to throw them as far as we could.We did that but it didn’t last long because he threw a fire cracker in a hay bale and it got on fire and we ran home and pretended like nothing had happend
ReplyDeleteNothing similar had happend before. My parents woke me up at 6AM telling me they had a surprise for me. I got in the car and slept for like 2 hours.When i woke up i saw that we were at the airport. At this point i was really confused but after following my parents in the airport i found out that we were going at my long distance cousing in Sweden. We got there and my cousin made my day one of the best days of my life .He bought us tickets to a Metallica concert. We got very lucky because we aere close to the scene.Not going to lie i had a pretty good time there and i alse made a photo with the guitarist of the band,Kirk Hammett.
Stefan
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DeleteI was with my cousin Ionut helping my grandfather with small things On HIS farm and after we finished our work Ionut comes next to me and pulled a pack of fire crackers and asked me if I wanted to throw them with him and because I was 9 and a very energetic kid.Of course , I acCepted...like nothing had happenEd
that we were going at my long-distance COUSIN in Sweden... we Were close to the sTAGE...and I alsO TOOK a photo with the guitarist of the band,Kirk Hammett.
Composition 1
ReplyDeleteA very long time ago, on a small farm the sun rose. The sky was changing colors quickly and soon, it was clear and blue.
The animals started to wake up one by one and to play around. The noise was getting louder and louder. The leaves were floating and playing with the baby animals. The wind was blowing their fur and was cooling them. They all came out of the barns to enjoy the magic morning and to snuggle on the warm grass.
Everything was peaceful until the owner came with food. All the animals piled up for it. The food and water disappeared rapidly from the massive bowls. The ground was a completely mess after the feeding so the owner had to clean all the leftovers.
These types of mornings were lovely. My heart loved to see that such simple animals could appreciate their owner more than anything.
Composition 2
Nothing similar had happened before. All sorts of animals from the immense forest near the village came to fight for their families. The villagers hushedly left the village with their hearts beating faster than ever.
The animals made their ways in people’s houses and left disaster. They were conveying each other through low sounds what they were seeing. There were animals in every yard and the fences started to fall apart. The streets were full of trash, metals and food.
One of the tiny squirrel noticed a towering building that smelled like meat and wanted to show it to the others. All the animals were staying unwavering in front of it. They decided to go in and quickly realized that it was a butcher. The walls were full of meat and leather.
The animals came out nervous. In front of the building there were many hunters with bows, but the animals were ready to attack them. Fortunately, no animal or human were harmed and they managed to bring the animals back to the forest.
The villagers fathomed that it was because of the animal killing and stopped doing it excessively. Soon, the village started to get more plantations and to use less animal products.
Catalina
The ground was a complete mess... One of the tiny squirrelS...
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ReplyDeleteA very long time ago, on a small farm of my grandparents, I had to do the important chores. For example to feed the animals or to collect vegetables and fruits. My grandparents weren’t there for a few hours, so I had to do that alone.
I started to collect the carrots in a basket, then the lettuce. I put both baskets in the place my grandmother told me. After that, I fed the sheep, the pigs, the ducks, the chicken and the turkeys. I thought I closed the sheepfold and the pigsty very well but it didn’t.
The pigs split to the right and the sheep to the left. I panicked, I didn’t know what to do. I tried to come up with a plan. This was to catch the pigs first because the sheep had already known the path.
I succeeded to catch all of the pigs in a short time. They stopped at a tree, I was lucky because there were just three of them. I closed the pigsty, then I effortlessly found the sheep.
My grandparents arrived after approximately half an hour and until that I played with their adorable cats. I told them what happened and expected to be upset about my negligence. Instead, they were proud of me because I knew how to handle the situation.
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Nothing similar had happened before the day I entered the room and saw what a disaster it was.
I have had my kitten, Caramel, for 2 years now. He's orange, white dotted and overly playful. I noticed he seemed sad and he didn’t have the same energy he had. Because I suspected he just felt single, I decided to adopt a new little cat.
At first they couldn’t stand each other so I was suppose to separate them. They stayed for a long time in different rooms but easily my cats became best friends. They shared the food together, they played together, they did everything together.
One day I went in a trip for three days. I asked my friend to take care of them while I was gone, so she checked and fed them every morning and evening. On the last evening, I told her to stay home because I would get back home.
While I wasn’t with them, my cats, Caramel and Snowflake were calm and they didn’t break anything. The day I came my house was a mess. Everything was a disaster, I couldn’t imagine it was possible.
I wasn’t distraught, but I spent a lot of time to clean every corner of the house. I thought they wanted to make me a surprise.
Miruna
1. The amputation
ReplyDeleteA very long time ago, on a small farm , I was helping my grandparents to plant some vegetables. Outside was warm and sunny. The grass was like the emerald and the butterflies were flying as airplaines.
It was such a wonderful day but then I heard some noises. It was my cat . It was fighting with a snake. I was afraid of snakes, so I called my grandpa to come and to help its. My grandfather came fast as he could, he took a bow with arrows and he had thrown with an arrow and surprising he had hit the snake.
I was very proud of my grandpa, hence I made his favourite cake and the best lemonande I ever made.
After the cake, we went to the Vet to see what the cat had. The vet said that it had one nip one the paw. That was meaning that the cat had to amputate its paw. I was very unhappy but if we didn’t done the amputation, we would have lost its. So we did the operation.
The operation was a succes and the cat was healthy!
2. Dream
Nothing similar had happened before. I was outside with my friends. It was a rainy and dark day. We were bored but suddenly a man appeard. That man was called Happy. He told us that he could teleport us into a sweet world, where we could find anything we wished.
Bored, as we were, we didn’t realise that we could suffer something, so we went in his world.
We didn’t feel nothing on the way because Happy injected some serum in us.
My friends and I were teleported in the sweet world. The sweet world consisted only of sweets. It was delicious. Sweets everyway we looked. There were sweets from the entire world.
Happy said that we could eat how many sweets we wanted. So that was what we did. We ate almost all the candies.
I and my friends were so tired that we could sleept anywhere. So Happy took us and put us in a big cooker. One of my friends realised that we were in a huge cooker , so he woke us. Toghether we tried to escape but we couldn’t.
Luckily it was just a dream!
Maria
... Outside IT was warm and sunny.. to help IT...came AS fast as he could... he SHOT ONE and surprisingLY he HIT the snake....
DeleteSO I made... the best lemonade I HAD ever made.... one nip on the paw... That MEANT that the cat had to HAVE its paw AMPUTATED.... we HADN'T done the amputation, we would have lost IT... The operation was a succesS and the cat was healthy AGAIN!
a man appearEd... We felT nothing... we could SLEEP anywhere... Together..
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